One Moment

error · 09-05-2008, 05:36 AM

The Clock Time Is Running , Life Is Continue
Freeze The Time And Catch Your Single Opportunity
Go Back One Day And F!x Your Irrational Doings

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Or Let Your Irrational Doings Fix You
Just Pessimism ..
All This Resolutions Is Not Up To You

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All Happy Moments With You Got Shattered
Here Comes The Pain With Your Shadows

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Your Face With The Mask Of Love Is Suspected
All Your Fake Excuses Are Not Accepeted

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No One Going To Get You Out Of This Mess
Cause All This
You Feel Like You Surrounded By A Wall Of Bricks

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My Feelings Are Going To Flow
You're Going To Fall In My Feelings Flood Slowly
Put Off Your Mask And Stop Being Like A Lonely

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The Clock Is Run Out , Time Is Up Over
This Opportunity Comes Once In The Life Time
Pass The Time For One Moment

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Written By : Error

Silent pain · 09-05-2008, 05:55 AM

masha2 allah
i like it to much al9ara7a
oo fe al bedaya shakeet ent aly katba
walla i like it
nice one very nice
yalla another one ba3ad
show us ha

error · 09-05-2008, 06:02 AM

thx alot silent pain

dont doubt again :P

:D i will show ya next time my poems

=)

M E L A F · 09-05-2008, 06:05 AM

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اقتباس:

Your Face With The Mask Of Love Is Suspected
All Your Fake Excuses Are Not Accepeted

Thanks for the topic :)
Could you erred in some points
It is not all talk ratified or trust
But there are positions that can not lie where a friend
Because he does not want to lose

or
Because he may think carefully about your loss

Do you understand?

I hope I succeeded in delivering to
you my idea

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M E L A F · 09-05-2008, 06:10 AM

I forgot to say

:) Typing wonderful .. Wait next

error · 09-05-2008, 06:26 AM

thanks my sis , nice 2 see u in my topic

this poem is talkin about opportunities and how we must capture any opportunity we get

and also its talkin about value of the time

اقتباس:

you erred in some points
It is not all talk ratified or trust

^^ and i don't think there is a mistake

cuz if u gave ur trust to someone and he gave it away

u can call him : suspected or traitor

so trust become nothing if he gave it away

error · 09-05-2008, 06:27 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مفتونه بالعباس عفواً.. لإستظهار الروابط يرجى منك الرد على الموضوع أولاً

I forgot to say

:) Typing wonderful .. Wait next

^^ thx alot

wait for my next poem

M E L A F · 09-05-2008, 06:38 AM

I told you earlier that I weak in this language :$
I can erred in assessing the subject
Or erred in the expression of certain words
Sorry :$

error · 09-05-2008, 06:46 AM

no problem

we learn from our mistakes

^^ by the way .. maybe i got some mistakes in the grammer

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